Blog #15, class discussion

after speaking with the group, and going over my pre draft thoughts, i feel as if my current thoughts and ideas are sufficient and efficient enough for essay #3, though, they did give some ideas as to how to revise the essay for submission. Im going to need to cut some the "I's" out the essay, and more so focus on the picture with alot of emphasis to what each fallen petal meant. this is going to be berrrry interesting